Imaginary Memoir Corrections

This is James Bot, our interviewee, hopefully I'll be able to edit our interview and post it later this week.



Last week our written components were due, tomorrow are 2nd draft components are due. When going over the critique for my memoir on James, i don't know if the people who critiqued my work understood what i was going for. My group and i filmed our interview so I'm able to have a direct source. I learned the way he acts, the way he speaks, and terms he uses, so writing this memoir was not at all tough. I was actually confused in the beginning whether to write it professionally or using his words. If i wrote my way you wouldn't be able to understand him as a person, so i wrote with his words. I ended up ignoring half the corrections made but they did come in handy for spelling mistakes. Some things i needed to improve on were describing his emotions, and what his thoughts were of that scene.